DreamWeaver Mermaid Lines

I found a poem in my mermaid book that intrigued me enough to draw a character for it. I'm working on how to color it at the moment. She's got a lantern thingie cuz those shells are gonna be all glowwy and stuff. I really like how a lot of this came out, but some anatomy things go o.O in places. Some people have been talking to me about the fin placement, but I couldn't put a dorsal fin in because of the angle, and I put pelvic fins on most of my mers. why does it make a diff? all the same, I've pretty much decided to just start posting line work because it takes me so long to get everything done that for some work, it never even gets color >.< I hope that's not the same for this one though. Watermarks!!! I'm paranoid, lemme alone >.<

Poem:
I am the star that rises from the sea, the twilight sea.
I bring men dreams that rule their destiny.
I bring the dream-tides to the souls of men.
The tides that ebb and flow and ebb again.
These are my secrets, these belong to me.
~Dion Fortune


Kalo's Color Rules
I would be flattered if you wanted to color something, so I'm totally cool with it, you have my permission.
However, You must link to my version on your deviation.
leave a comment with a link here or on my page when you post your version.
<3 Thanks <3